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-waking patterns- by $fangedfem:iconfangedfem:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed




Waking-

...remembering to breathe....

-savoring a delicious intake of air that swallows like a sip of desperation and stale nostalgia.

Opening eyes-

...forced exhale...

-the air that escapes my lips leaves me with transparent amnesia.

Movement-

...breathe in...

-with arms embracing the fading heat current that intermingles with cotton sheets and cold sweat.

Memories-

...brain function...

-returns with a slow exhale of air that hauntingly whispers of dislocated pain.
©2004-2009 $fangedfem
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Author's Comments

I am not sure how to explain this one. I rarely go public with my written words-- but I thought....why not?

Not sure if this is a good idea- but in any case....here goes nothing.

If you are reading this thank you for trying to make sense of something that makes no sense to me.

-model: me

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~themexican-pi May 20, 2004, 9:51:10 PM
Well, that's a strange way to describe that sort of thing, but I like it, nice!

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The cure for death itself?

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°spot May 20, 2004, 9:51:15 PM
It is beautiful sweetheart.

:hug:

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~offshore May 20, 2004, 9:53:57 PM
Awesome piece of prose and image!

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=diosaperdida May 20, 2004, 9:57:04 PM
You should go public with your written words more. Beautiful imagery and flow.

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!Mike May 20, 2004, 10:07:46 PM
:cuddle:

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~tinder May 20, 2004, 11:29:40 PM
reminds me of how I wake up with a blank canvas and memories come back like big black sweeps of charcoal. The things hapenning in my life I would rather forget and rather not face.
Hope you are well.

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Haemoglobin is the key to healthy heart-beat.
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~pdtnc May 20, 2004, 11:39:59 PM
very nice....
gives me an idea (that I thought you might have already had)

Kinda like what i did with [link] but different 'cos your words are more fragmented

:blowkiss: hope your well

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~irishfae May 21, 2004, 12:47:37 AM
Baby I love this.. and not just the words. I love the photo as well, they seem to make one, wouldn't you say?

Anyway hun it's good to see a new deviation from you :)


Love you hun, hope you are muy well
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`aquapell May 21, 2004, 1:53:23 AM
you're perfect :hug:

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~gnomen May 21, 2004, 2:25:40 AM
well arent you a sunshine when you wake up :)
reminds me of waking up early to early in the morning ...
or waking up after a big party flow all night long
your words stick good ... its a process we take for granted maybe... your poetic sence is like a wakeup call for me now.
well done (and the picture fits the text)
:+fav:
-gnomen.

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